diff --git a/hole/hole.typ b/hole/hole.typ index 2ccc660..88e8e13 100644 --- a/hole/hole.typ +++ b/hole/hole.typ @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Square table. Lighting: Dim, only stove hood light. Dark shadows. Camera at the = INT. LIVING ROOM. COUCH PROFILE / LOW ANGLE: -#MC sits on the couch. Lightning: pitch black room. Only the TV screen illuminates #MC's face. Camera low, looking up at the #MC's side profile. The TV is off-screen. +#MC sits on the couch. Lighting: pitch black room. Only the TV screen illuminates #MC's face. Camera low, looking up at the #MC's side profile. The TV is off-screen. #MC is staring ahead, eyes glossy. @@ -73,14 +73,12 @@ PROFILE / LOW ANGLE: #MC drops the remote onto the cusion besides them. #MC closes their eyes. -= INT. LIVING ROOM. COFFE TABLE += INT. LIVING ROOM. MANTLE CLOSE UP: -Coffe table. Lightning: minimal. Phone light (diffused if possible) to light props specifically. On the coffe table engagement ring laying, opened. Camera focused on the ring. +A mantle. Lighting: minimal. Phone light (diffused if possible) to light props specifically. On the mantle, empty photo frame. Camera focused on the photo frame. -#MC hand enters the frame. Picks up the ring. - -#MC drops the ring onto the table. +Camera holds on the frame. Slow push into the frame. = INT. LIVING ROOM WIDE: