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Fix typos and update scene descriptions in "Hole" screenplay

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Gabriel Kaszewski
2026-08-25 07:37:51 +02:00
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@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Square table. Lighting: Dim, only stove hood light. Dark shadows. Camera at the
= INT. LIVING ROOM. COUCH
PROFILE / LOW ANGLE:
#MC sits on the couch. Lightning: pitch black room. Only the TV screen illuminates #MC's face. Camera low, looking up at the #MC's side profile. The TV is off-screen.
#MC sits on the couch. Lighting: pitch black room. Only the TV screen illuminates #MC's face. Camera low, looking up at the #MC's side profile. The TV is off-screen.
#MC is staring ahead, eyes glossy.
@@ -73,14 +73,12 @@ PROFILE / LOW ANGLE:
#MC drops the remote onto the cusion besides them. #MC closes their eyes.
= INT. LIVING ROOM. COFFE TABLE
= INT. LIVING ROOM. MANTLE
CLOSE UP:
Coffe table. Lightning: minimal. Phone light (diffused if possible) to light props specifically. On the coffe table engagement ring laying, opened. Camera focused on the ring.
A mantle. Lighting: minimal. Phone light (diffused if possible) to light props specifically. On the mantle, empty photo frame. Camera focused on the photo frame.
#MC hand enters the frame. Picks up the ring.
#MC drops the ring onto the table.
Camera holds on the frame. Slow push into the frame.
= INT. LIVING ROOM
WIDE: